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WEB WRITING EXERCISE ORIGINAL TEXT Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).
EDITING In
1996, six of the best-attended attractions in Nebraska were Fort Robinson
State Park, Scotts Bluff National Monument, Arbor Lodge State Historical
Park & Museum, Carhenge, Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer, and
Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park.
USING LISTS Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places were:
MORE EDITING Nebraska has several attractions. In 1996, some of the most-visited places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446). A GOOD SOLUTION In 1996, six of the most-visited places in Nebraska were:
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